Thursday, 14 February 2013

Self-Assessment


Front Cover: What I should improve on my front cover. The puffs on my front cover I should add more text so that it looks more integrated, so I should add puffs around my central image, so that it could balance out my front cover, also the buzz word “exclusive” I should make it more effective by making it bigger and bolder or maybe a different font so that it can stand out because it’s smaller than the other puffs. I will move my price near the barcode and make the barcode smaller. I will make my graphic image bigger so that it will attract my audience to buy my magazine. I will also try to smooth out my title so that it fits in with the main image and puffs on my front cover. This is what I will be doing to improve my front cover.  

Content’s page: On my contents page I should improve on is focusing on resizing my main artist picture because she currently looks “squashed” so I should therefore resize the image. I will also improve on the colour of my title block; I should make the colours darker so that my title block will stand out. I will also add in signatures from the artist on their image so that it does not look too plain. This is what I will be doing to improve my contents page.  

Article pages: Improving on my article page, I will highlight all the question’s so that my audience will not get confused, also it will make the question standout from the white background. The spelling’s in my article I will double check that it’s spelt right and not wrong, I will also make sure that my “I” are in capital. I will reread my magazine so that it makes sense and change some of the sentences so that my audience will understand and expect things, for example where I wrote in my first paragraph was a description on how Jazmine Sullivan looked on that day “hair worn loose in her signature curls” I will change this to how she looks like in the photo shoot. I will also add in more quotes it will have more integration. This is what I will be doing to improve on my article.  

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