*The puffs on the
page are too long – they should not be full sentences but punchy
and eye-catching.
*Does your magazine
have a slogan?
*Make your buzz
words stand out more.
*This is the first
edition – how are you promoting it to the audience?
Contents:
*Some of the images
appear to be squashed – make sure that you resize effectively
*Consider taking
more photographs on location rather than just having studio
photographs. All the images on the page are mid-shots with little
thought about mise-en-scene. By going out and taking photographs you
will have a better range.
Article:
*Check all spellings
as Photoshop will not do this for you.
*The main body of
text is too big. Remember that magazine pages are slightly smaller
than A4 so you will need to reduce the size by at least one third.
Also, some of the questions are in gold but others aren’t –
correct this.
*Page numbers are
needed.
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